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Package: 3-5 page detailed feedback
For a deep dive into your sitcom, I'd recommend 3-5 pages of page-by-page feedback.
The detailed report will look at how characters function, their believability and likeability, how they interact with each other and their relationships, plotting and timing and structure, and joke rate and where the opportunities for gear changes are. There'll be suggestions for how to take the sitcom forward and a bunch of 'what if?' scenarios.
I'd recommend this because writers often want detailed analysis of something they're committed to and are invested in and maybe are just missing that certain something. An outside pair of eyes can often see the potential that the writer may have overlooked.
£55