http://www.bitethenews.com/2008/09/26/safety-advice-for-sex-dungeon/
Isla St Clair..That name sorts out the Men from the Boys
Sex Dungeon
Based on a story in the Sun. Great thing about the Sun you don't have to do too much with them to make them a Spoof !!!!!!
Too realistic to be taken as a spoof.
It's certainly good, but you can tighten up a few sections.
"...dripped onto a client's privates." (grammar)
"I will never know" x2 in para. 7. (repitition)
Is she called "The Dominatrix" or "Mistress Storm"? Or both? And which is current? Maybe clarify that aspect (continuity).
Regardless, I did enjoy this. Quality stuff as usual, Norm. 