Quote: Aaron @ September 22 2008, 4:24 PM BSTRather amusing. In places.
Very little consistency to the mother character though. Starts off seeming prim and proper, ends up implying orgies and other such filth. She seems to be a mouthpiece for a number of different 'messages' (the snootyness and the criticisms of Lara and her lifestyle, mainly), which would be perhaps better split into two characters?
Interesting points. I had her down as a mother who is very indulgent of her son whilst still trying her best to support her husband (apart from his antics with Lara/Miss Whiplash). I'll have a look at tweaking it so it better emphasises that.
In my mind she's modelled on that woman who did a lot of work with Groucho Marx!
Thanks!
Quote: Morrace @ September 23 2008, 2:22 AM BSTThanks Frankie & Sooty - sorry about the hijack Frankie!
I HAVE posted something in Critique:
No probs Morrace, you're always welcome in my threads.. enjoyed the banter! I will take a look at the piece you posted in critique later! 