Fancy giving a hand?

I've spent this afternoon assembling a script for a pilot sketch show I'm about to tout around.

Any one fancy a peak? It's more of a greatest hits than anything new.

All feedback welcome and will gladly forward it on.

Also what should I call it?

1 S3 (Pronounced Scube)
2 In the dog.
3 The magic number.
4 The great space toaster.
5 Electric Sadness.
6 Phishing for compliments.
7 Never mind the rollocks here's the oars.
8 Not So Super Friends.

I'd love a peak.

I'm not sure about any of those titles.

It's needs to be something in yer face n punchy, considering the type of sketches u do.

How about Brain Tumour Sandwich ???

(that used to be the name of a band I fronted years ago)

Thanks Tommy it's enroute!

But what do you reckon is the best title?

I quite like 3.?

Quote: Mikey J @ September 20 2008, 5:31 PM BST

I'm not sure about any of those titles.

It's needs to be something in yer face n punchy, considering the type of sketches u do.

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I've gone for less political less gross stuff.

It's more I dunno whimsical?

Fancy a look.

Thanks Zoo, I'm looking for distinctive not neccasairly funny.

Tumor amore?

Quote: sootyj @ September 20 2008, 5:35 PM BST

I've gone for less political less gross stuff.

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Oh, right. Well, I never expected that!

(dances around like that of Tales Of The Unexpected)

Yeah .... course I'd like to see it.

Electric Sadness. Not too wordy, nice balance, memorable.

Acutally, Joel, a couple of associates and I are planning a radio sketch show. But its very much a pipe dream atm. I'm calling it the Poseidon Phuc Quarter-Hour (though t'will be 30 minutes).

I always planned a sketch show called Frigid Cheesecake.

I'll get orf me arse one day n do it.

can't get your email to work Mikey

I've got it Joel. Looking good. I'll get back to you tomorrow. Tis 3am here.

Quote: sootyj @ September 20 2008, 5:43 PM BST

can't get your email to work Mikey

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Can't you. Bugger. Maybe that's why I'm not getting running orders.

Hold on, I'll take a look.

TWO MINUTES LATER...

My email is working fine. Just tested it.

Er... how are you trying to email me?

Quote: Mikey J @ September 20 2008, 6:39 PM BST

Can't you. Bugger. Maybe that's why I'm not getting running orders.

Hold on, I'll take a look.

TWO MINUTES LATER...

My email is working fine. Just tested it.

Er... how are you trying to email me?

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The one on your profile.

Would be happy to read it

As would I. Email me at your leisure.