British Comedy Guide

Pile on!

EXT. A FIELD - DAY

A man is stood pointing at something off screen.

MAN1
(Shouting)
Pylon!

A man charges past him towards where he was pointing, we hear a loud crack and then the man limps back past with smoke coming off him, hair stood on end, and a charred face. Man1 shakes his head as he watches him go past.

MAN1
Not again

Cut to reveal the men stood near an electricity pylon.

I don't think the last line is needed but it's a nice little sketch there :D

I thought people would be confused without that last line but if it works anyway then I shall remove it.

Cheers

I doesn't work without some explanation of the pylon/pile-on mix up. Also, "Pile on" isn't a universal term (we scream "bundle" in our neck of the woods).

There's a good joke in there I reckon, you're just not hitting it right now.

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