A more angry Spoof....But does it work ???

http://petermusgrove.com/2008/08/25/goth-it-wrong/

I hope so as I would like to get far more vocal about my pet hates...

Brilliant, Norman. Very funny, witty and satirical. I've posted a couple of spoof news stories and would definitely appreciate some feedback from a pro.

[There were a couple of typos in the "Including the Kids" section, 2nd para: I = It, & .. people's". Just in case you missed 'em ]

Loved it.

Not bad but you shoot your bolt to soon in my view.

I'd start with a respectful analysis of the book, then move onto interviewing people in such away as to rubbish her.

Goth? She did like Gothic music.

Wild child? She did stab a butler to death, but whi didn't.

Many thanks re typo error's. Have sorted it out. Please PM me your spoof stories, I'd love to read them. Also have you looked at www.thespoof.com

Good place to see different styles and get stuff reviewed etc.

P.S. Thanks for that Sootyj but on this occasion got to say I don't think 'Wild child? She did stab a butler to death, but who didn't' would work.

Quote: Norman Wisdom @ August 25 2008, 3:11 PM BST

Many thanks re typo error's. Have sorted it out. Please PM me your spoof stories, I'd love to read them. Also have you looked at www.thespoof.com

Good place to see different styles and get stuff reviewed etc.

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Cheers; no worries, have sent, will look - thanks Norman.