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Crime fiction publishing sketch Page 2

Very good you have the two characters very much on the nail.

Could maybe be a little trimmed.

Otherwise top stuff.

Once this sketch got going I was laughing till the end. Very good indeed. Very Pythonesque as has been said.

Thanks chaps. You've lifted me out of a glum evening. :)

Quote: swerytd @ August 21 2008, 4:02 PM BST

Also, your final line is funny and punchy and ends the sketch well, but it might be better if you use an animal that people already sympathise a lot with (panda/koala/kitten) to make his follow-up even more inappropriate.

"The Rape of Julian Sparrow" - any better?

Quote: Tommy Power @ August 22 2008, 2:54 PM BST

"The Rape of Julian Sparrow" - any better?

You want an animal that isn't an actual surname, so something ridiculous like a baboon or a wallaby.

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