Dark and very funny. Agree with RobO's suggestion which I think sets up the punchline better.
Robot Arms Page 2
Thanks, Timbo. I've made the changes. I've also got the robot baby spitting sparks and saying "I love you, mummy!" in a robot voice. God knows how I'll pull that off but you've got to go for broke at the writing stage, haven't you?
Good stuff, very much enjoyed that.
Cheers, Stu.
Nice one David!
For some reason I feel this would be funnier not animated.
But I'm a weird f**k so who knows.
It would be funnier not animated, but I think filming it would be difficult. Animation gives you freedom to do this sort of thing.
you could buy a toy windup robot and stick it in a nappy.
As for the arms.
That's amazing!
The sketch and the...um
...illustration...
Yes very good I must say. It is the sort of sick stuff that goes down well on TV nowadays.
Oh 'Dads Army'...Innocent times !!!!
P.S. I agree with the others, definately better not animated .It would lose so much of its power.
Thanks again, guys. Fret ye not, it's live action all the way.
Brilliant sketch Dave, just brilliant!
Frankie xxx 