Day I saw Queen fall Arse over Tit

http://petermusgrove.com/2008/08/20/day-i-saw-queen-fall-arse-over-tit/

Any ideas re improvement.....

Good idea and in the main funny.

Illegal Ivan is a dreadful name, the he saids seem to jar, and it's a bit long.

Also you could play up the pranking, mischeif element I think.