Shite Drinks Co. (spoof commercials)

Shite Drinks

Int.
A man and a woman are sat on a sofa watching TV. The man looks slightly under the weather.

The man sighs

WOMAN
Are you feeling ok babe? You look a little under the weather

MAN
I don't feel too great to be honest

WOMAN
Have you had a shite today?

MAN
No

WOMAN
You'd probably feel much better if you did

MAN
Do you think so?

WOMAN
I'm positive, I think I'll have one as well

MAN
Yeah that'll be nice we can have one together

Man gets off the sofa and leaves the room. We hear a fridge door open. He re enters the room carrying two bottles

Here you go

WOMAN
Thanks

The shite logo appears on screen

VOICEOVER GUY
Shite: Because you're worth it

Sorry they did nothing for me... it was all a bit too obvious...

And you've obviously never had France's favorite soft drink... http://www.pschitt.fr/

kjs

The idea was that I was going to write a sketch to make a comment on how advertising seems to be getting more explicit whilst also mocking the fact that a lot of the things we see being advertised are crap and unnecessary. Though I don't seem to have struck the right balance yet

It's a good badoom tish skit, but it's way to long.

A long skit like that needs a much stronger punchline.