An odd idea I had, not sure if it's very funny Page 2

Ok I'll do that.

Yeah, it is a great sketch.

I love those kind of sketches where a crowd of people are reacting.

Very good work. Out of interest how long did this one take from concept to posting in critique?

It's an idea I've had for years,

but about 5 minutes.

I think people are finding it really intelligent and fascinating sootyj. Are you worried that the necessary exposition detracts from straight up jokes/one-liners etc. I think it'd be down to delivery. Persons 1 and 2 being gruff sounding Geezers looking like ex-cons, i think might be an idea. And perhaps an ending with superman and batman scuffling with each other over some meaningless detail of their new roadsweeping/burger joint jobs could be fun.

Thanks, I suppose it's intersting for me, in that it's very gag light.

I kinda like the idea that Superman just flys off, and Batman thinks he's all that but he's not.

But I see what you mean, certainly making the two guys opinionated geezers is a nice touch, I may incorporate.