Not really critique as such, but I was just wandering the anals of time on another website's long-forgotten comedy-writing board, and found these two Simpsons script that some (very talented) writer put together.
They are *so* just like real Simpsons scripts, I thought it might be nice to share. They are full-length though, so set aside plenty of time if you are interested. I think they are a masterclass in how to write for existing sitcoms.
They are nothing to do with me, btw, just think they deserve a wider audience.
Cent of a Man: http://boards.fool.co.uk/Message.asp?mid=6944771
Radioactive Homer: http://boards.fool.co.uk/Message.asp?mid=6998192
Enjoy
Dan