Quote: Godot Taxis @ July 17 2008, 5:24 PM BSTThis sketch has just blocked out the sun. It's not quite right though.
For me the bit that jars is the way the man talks; it would be better if he was very underplayed and naturalisitc I think. But what the hell do I know.
Quote: Winterlight @ July 17 2008, 5:24 PM BSTOr maybe just skin someone? I'm sure there's someone out there to exploit.
I'll let David know of your kind offer.
Quote: Matthew Stott @ July 17 2008, 5:26 PM BSTFor me the bit that jars is the way the man talks; it would be better if he was very underplayed and naturalisitc I think. But what the hell do I know.
No, you're right. It need naturalism, because it starts at the edge of the universe.
Quote: Matthew Stott @ July 17 2008, 5:26 PM BSTFor me the bit that jars is the way the man talks; it would be better if he was very underplayed and naturalisitc I think. But what the hell do I know.
I like the personality of the man, but the dialogue definitely needs to be delivered more naturally.
I went with hoity toity dialogue deliberately because it's such a classic setup/punch kind of gag but maybe it would be better served played more naturally. I'll have a think about it.
Thanks as ever for the feedback guys.