"Is that a 'veiled' invite to your wedding reception Andy ?! "
Will have to be someone else's mate - too late for mine. Still, if the wife keeps refusing to...well....erm.....can't really say on here.....but anyway, if she does I might be looking for another one.
I agree with Badge re: shorter version is better as it says the joke without losing any of the gag.
"The only place fluffing should occur is on those dodgy films I never owned, your 'onour."
And I laughed at AJP's comment about deadlines.
I think you've already sorted the problem but if you can lose: HUSBAND
It's OK darling. I'm wearing the same as everyone else.
If you can do this then I reckon you've got a perfect sketch.
This little gem made me laugh out loud and I'd love to see this kind of funny visual smut voted into the sketch show project when it is up and running which, hopefully, it will be very soon.
Very Smack the Pony, I love that show.
This would make me laugh but only if the cock hat and the settings looked spot on. All about execution. Good, though 
The short version is very good. Like it a lot.
I like both versions. I don't think the party setting is a problem. Stuff like SlagA's suggestion about the party atmosphere foley track is just one of a load of 'tricks' that could be used to make it seem like a more crowded affair without busting your budget balls.