My Sitcom scenes - Thoughts? Page 2

Well, certainly well presented. Unfortunately, it didn't make me laugh. As others have said Nat and Toby are very flat, you need to find a bit of edge there. Maybe they used to date? Or something happened last night between them? Far too much bantering for my liking. The Craig character looks as though he could be someone, but he still needs working on.

Really does remind me of the thing on BBC Three a few weeks back, the name escapes me, about a pregnant blonde girl and someone in the office was the father.

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Quote: Timbo @ July 4 2008, 9:57 PM BST

I can identify with all of that. It is a completely different way of thinking about comedy. But the challenge is intriguing isn't it?

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It is both intriguing and captivating and keeps pulling you back for more.

I liken it to learning to drive. You realise that there is a steering wheel, mirrors, and a number of switches and buttons. You even have a good grasp of what they all do. The problem is, you now have to use them all together. You want to put your foot down and just drive but when you do, you get so far and stall. The more you practice and the more you learn, the better you get at it. Well that's my way at looking at it anyway.

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