http://petermusgrove.com/2008/07/03/tramp-sells-life-for-35000/
My latest effort. Comments please...... Grammar ?
Tramp sells life for £35,000
Very slick, good idea and funny.
One tweak I'd make one of them speak like a tramp. Doesn't really matter which.
Also I'd cut all the lists down to 3 items.
Cheers sootyj. Have cut list to 4 taking out The half litre of white lightning cider and yes it does read better. Wanted to leave in the antibiotics as it implies some kind of untreated fungal infection [ which you have to agree is always funny ] and the heavily soiled underpants.
Thanks for the comment, its appreciated.
http://petermusgrove.com/2008/07/03/tramp-sells-life-for-35000/
Yes that reads better, I still would love to hear some Tramp speak some where. But I do like the old cliches.
Cheers Sootyj. Actually had an e mail from the Press officer for Camden Council, Rosie Elliott, asking me if there was any truth in it, so it is getting out there. My forum saturation is finally paying off !!!!
http://petermusgrove.com/2008/07/03/tramp-sells-life-for-35000/