Quote: sootyj @ July 1 2008, 12:31 PM BSTI'm sure the Delmonte corporation will appreciate your feedback.
It wasn't Delmonte i was trying to help.
Learning from Sitcom Critique Page 2
The man in the white hat will be devastated.
Quote: sootyj @ July 1 2008, 1:51 PM BSTThe man in the white hat will be devastated.
Why....is he picking any old fruit and getting people to sample it in the hope one bit turns out to be less mouldy than the rest?
No he's a fan of 70s SuperGroup, he wants Only of a Lonely Heart, and people just give him tinned peaches
And this week, Sootyj's nemesis is.... Pete!
rake, my arch-enemy' Bart:' I thought I was your arch-enemy' Bob: 'Oh Bart there's not only you in my life!'
Quote: Timbo @ June 30 2008, 9:55 PM BSTI think it has been a terrific learning exercise, and it has really inspired me to give it another crack.
Now when do we see yours?
I have the start of something that I might post on the critque board for some initial feedback. It is currently in 'complete crap' stage, so I just want to improve it up to the level of 'pretty terrible' before I post it up.
Def.