British Comedy Guide

The new father confessor

INT. A CONVENT. THERE IS A CURTAINED CONFESSIONAL BOX.

A YOUNG NUN STEPS OUT OF THE BOX, AND SMOOTHES DOWN HER HABIT.

NUN

Thank you, Father.

THE PRIEST POKES HIS HEAD ROUND THE CURTAIN, ON THE SAME SIDE THE NUN CAME OUT. HE IS QUITE A YOUNG MAN, MOP HAIRED AND UNSHAVEN. HIS ACCENT SHOWS HIM TO BE AUSTRALIAN.

PRIEST (WITH A BIG WINK)

And don't do it again.

MOTHER SUPERIOR (ENTERING)

Ah, Father, I've caught you! I wonder if I might have a word?

PRIEST

Sure can do.

THE PRIEST EMERGES FROM THE CONFESSIONAL, ADJUSTING HIS CASSOCK.

MOTHER SUPERIOR (TO THE NUN) You can run along now, sister.

THE SISTER CURTSIES, WITH A SLIGHTLY PAINED EXPRESSION, BEFORE TURNING AND LEAVING.

MOTHER SUPERIOR

Father, er, Dirk. How long have you been with us as father confessor here at St. Hilda's?

PRIEST

Oh, that'd be about a month, give or take.

MOTHER SUPERIOR

You have certainly made an impression in that time. Your methods are very different to those of your predecessor, Father Michael.

PRIEST

That right?

MOTHER SUPERIOR

Yes, for one thing Father Michael did not find it necessary for the holy sisters to sit on his knee when he took their confessions.

PRIEST

Well, don't want to speak ill of the old fossil, but ...

MOTHER SUPERIOR

Father Michael is a very holy man.

PRIEST

You know it. But Mother Church has moved on. Father confessor is a hands on job.

MOTHER SUPERIOR

Yes, I'll come to that in a moment. I am a little concerned at the direction confessionals have been taking. I must say Father Michael put rather less emphasis on uncovering the sisters' impure thoughts.

PRIEST

Convent's rife with them. It's shocking.

MOTHER SUPERIOR

Well, yes, I suppose. But then there is the question of your penances.

PRIEST

Harsh, but fair I'd say.

MOTHER SUPERIOR

Perhaps, but I don't recall Father Michael relying quite so much on over-the-knee spanking. Poor Sister Francesca hasn't sat down in a week.

PRIEST

Sister Francesca's thoughts were particularly impure. Downright kinky really.

MOTHER SUPERIOR

Well, I suppose you know your business best, but I don't know what Father Michael would have said. Good day, Father.

SHE TURNS TO LEAVE.

PRIEST

Oh, Mother Superior, it's been a while since I saw you in the confessional box.

THE PRIEST SITS HIMSELF DOWN IN THE CONFESSIONAL AND PATS HIS KNEE.

MOTHER SUPERIOR

Ah, yes, it has, hasn't it?

SHE SITS ON THE PRIEST'S KNEE.

MOTHER SUPERIOR

Such a shame about Father Michael, but we really had no choice but to let him go after that incident with the boys' choir.

THE PRIEST PULLS THE CURTAIN ACROSS.

END.

Nice one Timbo. Unsurprising denouement/punchline though. Quaint feel to it, sort of Dave-Allen-ish.

It's totally predictable, but convincing, and likeable enough to work.

Hm, yes, the confessional box does bring to mind Dave Allen, and there is more than a nod to 70s nunsploitation flics, but I had hoped that the punchline gave a contemporary twist. Perhaps not enough.

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