Who would like....

To read my script. Yes, it's that simple. I just need a couple of people (2 or 3) to read it and give me feedback (bits that made you laugh, bits that need work,) because I've got a BBC producer interested in it. And I'd like to get back to them in atleast a couple of says. The script isn't too long either just 45 pages.

If you think you can help, PM me.

I appreciate it. Also, sorry if this is in the wrong section.

You're not giving yourself a lot of time to work on feedback if you have to get it back by the end of the day. Is it an absolute deadline? - taking a day or two might be better in the long run.

Yeah, you're probably right. A couple of days might be better.

Edit: I've also edited my above post.

I'm going to move it to critique, seeing as you're looking for feedback.