Hey everyone. I just stumbled across this site and it is just what I'm looking for. I have written a 20 page sketch show which I would love to get some feedback on. This is a first draft so it will not be perfect by any means, I just want to know if I'm going in the right direction here.
Here's a link http://myfreefilehosting.com/f/8526a7540a_0.02MB
It's a PDF file.
So yeah, let me know what you all think and it will be greatly appreciated.
Cheers
I'm afraid I read the first paragraph and when you attributed "Let's Get It On" to Barry White and not the peerless Marvin Gaye I stopped.
Bo.
Marvin Gaye \o/
Sorry 
I'm not really a big fan and someone told me that was who it was.
Quote: Leevil @ May 24 2008, 5:17 PM BSTMarvin Gaye \o/
Please don't mock The Prince of Soul.
Bo.
Quote: Bohannon @ May 24 2008, 5:22 PM BSTPlease don't mock The Prince of Soul.
Bo.
Please don't suggest I'd do such a thing, I'm a big fan.
Anyone going to say what they think then?
I think it's better if you post it up in small pieces. Most people don't have the time to read whole episodes (although they do spend most their time on here 
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Try posting a few select sketches to wet people apatite.
Link expired
Still works for me?
Quote: Chris Forshaw @ May 25 2008, 3:54 PM BSTStill works for me?
Nope, link's dead on me too.
Perhaps it only works for you because you're logged in under your name and password. Maybe there's a box to tick that states 'make available to public' huh?
Ah well, I'll leave it for now, since I've posted some of the sketches in their own threads, and I'm making improvements to it all the time. I'll put it up again when I'm happy it's good to go.