I know the format is slightly odd but there you go.
The Meteor Sketch
Hi,
Nice idea but way too long in my opinion. You need a bit of animation for the figures.
Good stuff though.
John
Purple Comedy
I agree, if you are going to use such a lack of movement in your characters then it needs to be shorter or you need to do something thats not going to bore the person after a while.
Fair enough. I was just trying something different instead of just a written sketch. It doesn't look so boring on the page.
A good example of how crap actors can ruin any script.