British Comedy Guide

Bill Gates phonecall

INT. NIGHT. HOME.

BILL GATES IS TALKING ON THE PHONE TO CEO STEVE BALLMER.

SFX PHONE RINGS

BILL: Hello.

STEVE: Bill, Steve here, I take it you heard Yahoo’s price.

BILL: Yeah, they’re greedy bastards. Did you get anywhere with them?

STEVE: I tried to compromise Bill.

BILL: On what?

STEVE: The software, I offered them Powerpoint News and Dating Works.

BILL: That seems reasonable, what’d they say?

STEVE: They turned it down.

BILL: Greedy bastards.

STEVE: They proposed Yahootlook and Accessenger.

BILL: What damned mumbo jumbo is that?

STEVE: Mumbo jumbo weren’t involved Bill.

BILL: Why, who the hell are they?

STEVE: Dunno, you’d need to go on Wikipedia to find out.

BILL: (confused) What? (PAUSE) What about email?

STEVE: Its like posting a letter but a helluva lot quicker. (SFX SNIGGERS)

BILL: I meant Yahoo mail Balmer, you greedy bastard.

STEVE: Sorry Bill, it wont happen again.

BILL: You’re damned right it wont.

STEVE: You got my word on that Bill, my Microsoft Word. (SFX GIGGLING)

BILL: Cut the crap or I’ll run you out of town like a cheap pygmy. And email, remember?

STEVE: I’ll need to check it, I’ll get back to you on that.

BILL: So where are we now?

STEVE: I’m in a jacuzzi Bill and you?

BILL: (shouting) Where the hell are we as regards negotiations?

STEVE: Yahoo are in talks about merging.

BILL: With whom?

STEVE: Giggle and AWOL. (SFX LAUGHING)

PHONE LINE GOES DEAD.

VOICE: Who was that dear?

BILL: Some greedy bastard.

ENDS.

I wanted to like this alot more than I did, it's not a bad idea, but it's a lot of puns, with no real punch, and a bit flabby.

Cut it down to a stacato 5 words a line, and less giggling, and greedy bastards it could really work.

n.b. if you mention Mac in your punchline, would give you a nice pace change punchline.

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