mAlice in Wonderland surreal Purple Comedy

Hi

Just produced a new show based on Alice in Wonderland, topical comedy in a surreal setting. Trying to do soemthing different!

Let us know what you think.

http://standupcomedy.podOmatic.com

John

the link doesn't work

Hi,

Sorry posted a duff link.

Thanks for letting me know.

Sorted now.

John

Quote: John Burns @ April 26 2008, 12:28 PM BST

Hi,

Sorry posted a duff link.

Thanks for letting me know.

Sorted now.

John

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I liked listening to this John but it didn't make me laugh, I smiled a few times and found it entertaining, as in a light entertainment radio sketch/prog.
I thought it would be good at the end Alice if said something like, she wished she was dreaming but unfortunately she's not this is how the world really is

Hi,

Thanks for that. All feedback helpful. I think what you said is fair comment. We were mainly trying to find a different format, to get a different sound, not sure how strong the humour is, that's for other folk to judge.

If you found it entertaining, that's good enough for me.

John

Moving to Critique.

If you have other reason to believe it shouldn't be there give me a PM.

I liked it - nice feelgood comedy.