http://petermusgrove.com/2007/12/22/190/
Another attempt at keeping it tight. 
UK Government : Hospital waiting lists exposed.
Again I am liking the new style, coherent, clever, and funny.
I would how ever consider shortening it a little bit.
Otherwise top notch satire.
Have similar thing called Tiger in Your Hospital in critique, if your interested in my take.
In my opinion, much improved style, Peter. More mature, less Viz - if that makes sense. But agree with Sooty that there's still a bit more flab that could be hacked out.
