British Comedy Guide

Wake Invasion

This one was inspired by Winterlight, who suggested youths gatecrashing a wake as a setup. I went a slightly different way. Comments appreciated.

INT. LOUNGE – DAY

A WAKE. MOURNERS CONSOLE THE WIDOW.

THE PHONE RINGS AND GOES STRAIGHT TO ANSWERPHONE. THE MESSAGE IS BROADCAST LOUD ENOUGH FOR ALL TO HEAR.

MAN: (O.O.V.)
Hello, Peter - how are you, you old bugger! I wanted you to know I’ve been thinking about you non-stop since the weekend. We had some fun didn’t we? You’ll never fit that up there I said, but you bloody well did! I thought we’d have to get the jaws of life to get that pepper mill out!

A MOURNER EDGES AWAY FROM THE BUFFET TABLE. THE WIDOW BURSTS INTO HYSTERICS.

MAN: (O.O.V.)
Anyway, give us a call before your wife gets back in town, and don’t forget to delete your messages, you silly sausage!

CUT TO:

INT. KITCHEN – CONTINUOUS

ON THE OTHER END OF THE LINE, THE MAN REPLACES THE PHONE. A WOMAN ENTERS, SURPRISING HIM.

WOMAN:
Who was that, honey?

MAN:
Just a wrong number.

WOMAN:
Oh.

SHE LEAVES.

MAN
(TO SELF)
That could have been embarrassing…

Ah nice, veyr nice, you're on a bit of a roll today?

Now if you could some how imply the pepper mill was still up his butt?

Maybe pan to the coffin the body is on it's front, with a hankee decorously covering the protusion from the bottom?

But if the pepper mill was still up there there would be no surprise at the dead man's gay double life.

That's what a pull back to reveal is for!

Quote: sootyj @ April 9 2008, 10:40 AM BST

That's what a pull back to reveal is for!

It's not really a pull back and reveal if it's already been stated. I think it would just be a cheap Cut To:

Anyway, I liked the sketch. It was a nice twist on a basic sketch standard.

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