INT. CAR. DAY
CAMERA FOCUS ON REAR VIEW MIRROR. YOU SEE A MAN'S EYES AND A REFLECTION OF AN AMBULANCE WITH LIGHTS FLASHING AND (SFX SIREN).
CAMERA PULLS BACK TO REVEAL 2 PARAMEDICS IN COP CAR.
CUT TO EXT. AMBULANCE DRIVEN BY COPS OVERTAKES THEM.
CUT TO INT. OF COP CAR.
PARAMEDIC: Ambulance staff must be having their fancy dress day too.
ENDS.
Hehe -- liked it. Think your punchline feels a bit long -- needs to be said in a different, punchier (ahaha!) way.
Dan
It's a nice idea. What if at the end they approach the scene of a road accident and the paramedics dressed like cops give the real police the finger and peel off, leaving them to carry the baby?
Thanks for feedback guys.
My posts seem to disappear, most excelent, deserves a home.