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i'm intrigued.

but a bit thick.

can you give me an example?

For example, in your

I want research and experiments and the very best nurses looking after him, I read an article in the waiting room – not this time but last time – about a boy who lives in a bubble-

chuck a couple of throwaways gags in:

I want futile experiments and invasive procedures and the very butchest male nurses looking after him, I read an article in Obsessive Compulsive Parenting – more than once – about a boy who lives in a bubble-

or something like that. If you see what I mean. It will keep people interested in the 'current' dialogue, rather than them just waiting solely for the punchline.

EDIT: edited it for an additional OCD joke!

Dan

i was going for sparky dialogue rather than full on jokes.

pretentious, moi?

No probs -- it's your sketch! Just what I think.

Dan

damn your thoughts! damn your thoughts to hell!