Testicular Problems

http://petermusgrove.com/2008/01/28/a-laddish-approach-to-a-lads-compliant/

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Now this one, I quite liked, nice style, and works well. Could be a bit shorter, and tighter. Also crying out for a punch, about some one talking balls.

Quote: sootyj @ March 29, 2008, 9:47 AM

Now this one, I quite liked, nice style, and works well. Could be a bit shorter, and tighter. Also crying out for a punch, about some one talking balls.

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Thanks for that Sootyj

Just feel a line such as 'Talking Balls' would be a bit obvious. But that's whats good about this forum I suppose. Everyone has their different styles of writing.

Possibly the title could have read..'Talking Balls'