INT. HOSPITAL – DAY
A SOMBRE FACED DOCTOR APPROACHES A YOUNG MOTHER AND HER SON.
DOCTOR:
I'm sorry… we did all we could but… he's gone.
THE BOY LOOKS UP TO HIS MOTHER, LIP QUIVERING.
SON:
Where did daddy go, mummy?
THE MOTHER IS RACKED WITH SOBS.
DIRECTOR: (O.O.V)
Yes!
PULL BACK TO REVEAL WE'RE ON A MOVIE SET.
DIRECTOR:
F**king nailed that shit!
HE HIGH FIVES THE LITTLE BOY.
You've written better, this is just a reflection on what probably happens all the time
Quote: sootyj @ March 28, 2008, 1:54 PMYou've written better, this is just a reflection on what probably happens all the time
That's true. Maybe for it to work I could make the situation even more extreme. It's the sort of sketch that will rely mainly on the enthusiasm of the actor playing the Director role really.