Silly Names

http://petermusgrove.com/2007/11/30/enough-is-enough-for-silly-names/

Any comments will be gratefully recieved.....

Not bad, bit of a shaggy dog story. You might want to play up some gags, and some Scottish specific ones.

For example the traigc death of Llama Johnson, beaten to death after Scotland was knocked out of the World Cup in 1973.

Thanks for the comment but how would that link into the article which was based on a real life story in the Daily Record.

Just thinking that if you made the story, the same, but played up the significance of the individual silly names.

It could do with some laughs to be honest. It just sort of rambles on without going anywhere.