It helps if you've seen the SpecSavers ad...
Pretty much the first vid I've ever done, so don't be too harsh on editing. I can always tidy that up.
It helps if you've seen the SpecSavers ad...
Pretty much the first vid I've ever done, so don't be too harsh on editing. I can always tidy that up.
I thought it was ok.
I think it has real good potential. Get rid of the specsavers bit and concentrate on what's happening around her. The specsavers ad will be gone soon and therefore the whole first bit of the song. Just a suggestion.
I agree with Roscoff. The Specsavers bit is unnecessary. The observations, like calling passers by tramps, was what made it work. The biggest problem you have is to keep it entertaining for the duration of the song. You might be better off just using a portion of it.
And your editing was fine.
What about something like [and I don't know the song well enough to be accurate]
This in ole' France
Is what they
Think is music
I know
It is shit
I know
Because I wrote it.
I'm sure you could fiddle around with it [so to speak!]
I liked this. Would change the spec savers bit as suggested and would change the 'what the f**k, who are you?' bit to 'who the f**k... are you'