Int. Bedroom
A woman is searching through a drawer on the bed. She is chucking items about. A man enters.
Man: What are you doing?
Woman: I've lost something.
Man: What?
Woman: My breasts.
The woman pats her chest to indicate no breasts.
Man: Your breasts?
Woman: Yes. Have you seen them anywhere?
Man: Well, uh, only on your chest.
Woman: I've already looked there.
Man: Where did you last have them?
Woman: You know where!
Man: (CHUCKLES) Well I just brushed my teeth and they're not there now.
Woman: Dammit.
Man: I'm sure they'll turn up.
Woman: I need them now!
Man: Why?
Woman: I'm going to my sisters. You know how competitive she is.
Man: Do you want to borrow mine?
Woman: They're not pert enough.
The woman turns round. She has a pair of breasts visibly poking through the back of her jumper.
ENDS
Lost Item Sketch
Love the idea but I don't think you need that last line. End on the woman's I think, or even just the image of the boobs on her back.
Yeah I did think it was a bit drawn out. I'll end with just the image.
Erm it's ok, but it's a bit long, for whats a very simple punch.
Maybe a line up you were the last to have your hands on them.
I thought it was another strong idea for your wonderfully whimsical sketch collection, and as the other two posters have said, I think it can be tidied a little. Agree with David on the punch and think a better line for the "going to sister's" one can be found.