Silence in class!

CLASSROOM. DAY.

ALL THE CHILDREN ARE SAT WORKING IN COMPLETE SILENCE. THE TEACHER LOOKS AROUND SUSPICIOUSLY AS THIS IS UNUSUAL BEHAVIOUR.

TEACHER: Class..?

CLASS: Shhhh!

TEACHER: I beg your pardon?

CLASS: Shhhh!

TEACHER: That's enough of that! Do you all want detention?

UNSEEN PUPIL: Quiet at the front! We want to hear a pin drop!

TEACHER: Now just a minute...!

UNSEEN PUPIL: Silence!

TEACHER: Look, what's this all about?

THERE'S A PROLONGED SILENCE

TEACHER: Well..?

PUPIL: We've all got hangovers.

END

This one made me smile Tuumble. I didn't laugh out loud but it definitely made me smile and it is a good little quick sketch. Well done mate.

Not bad, nice idea...I think I'd prefer a stronger ending, but I immediately like the concept and perhaps if you were to think more about it you could have a gem of a sketch.

I think it needs a little something more to get into NR but good role reversal and a little more work and Bob's your probation officer.