Mr Wright’s Cliché Bullshit Page 2

I loved this line.

Mr Wright:
Yea, a nice drive around and maybe a prostitute---without any murder, mind you----helps me feel sleepy after a stressful day.

Anyhoo, started very well, did make me giggle a few times but I felt disapointed by the ending. Good sketch all the same. The acne, the forklift etc.

I've re-read the piece and feel I may have come across as a little harsh in my first critique. That said, it really really does need a tidy-up to be a successful performance piece. There is a lot of redundant material in there.