Boring!

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Very nice, a follow up a ring I hope?

That's pretty good, Jenny.
I really like the idea, though I would've liked to've seen a few more fantastical things happening in the wardrobe.

Very imaginative and original though, well done.

Yes Jenny. Impressive.

God sketch Jenny. The concept is good and is the basis for a series of sketches. Personally I would add some more fantastical things, maybe some Narnia creatures for example, and also a joke in the middle to keep the sketch ticking along.

What a lot of potential its all there it just needs extending she should have met some magical creatures and had an adventure and become dazzling and interesting herself only to revert back to her old ways upon her return back through the wardrobe. But keep it up you definitely have something.

Leave it allown it's succinct, I like succinct.

yes me too sootyj, it's good as it is

Yes it's good as it is cos it speaks volumes about the girl's attitude.

I like it the way it is... quick and simple... but MAGICAL!

Whoops, sorry no offence intended, just expressing a view, please please forgive me!!!!

shut up yer creep

Thought this was very good.

Only thing I would remove is "THINK “HARRY’S ENFIELD’S 'KEVIN'". You've shown the character perfectly in the sketch so no need to refer to anyone else.

It's very nice of everyone to respond so positively.

Thank you all very much.

I would love to see this made - it's clever and funny.