*deleted due to excessive pooness*
Caveman Sketch
I love the majority of your stuff, Perry, but I have to be honest this didn't really do anything for me.
I sniggered at the thought of Lorok coming out with an RP accent, but after that the piece just seemed to taper away.
For me, and of course this is just my opinion, it would have been better ending with the introduction of Lorok. I'm not normally the sharpest tool in the box though, so maybe I missed something?
Have you left something out? It didn't really seem to go anywhere.
Have to agree on the above two posts. Compared to your other sketches, of which I am a fan, tis not as good.
Yep ta guys. This is an old, old sketch that I tried to breathe life into.
Cheers for confirming what I thought - it's crud and should be buried without the honour of a gravestone. Sometimes old stuff you did years ago should be left where it belongs - in the Bad Ideas Cemetary, along with all the other comedy corpses of yesteryear.
I'm going through lots of my old stuff at the moment for inspiration. Not having much luck it has to be said...
F**k it I'm taking this sketch down. Let us speak no more of it. 'Tis dead to me!
Thanks again guys.