http://petermusgrove.com/2008/02/14/log-on-to-find-your-perfect-partner/
You need never be lonely again on Valentine's day. <3
A Valentine's Special ; Log on to Love.
Oh so its Kent Pete and his website AGAIN!
Quote: Pat_Rice @ February 14, 2008, 5:28 PMhttp://petermusgrove.com/2008/02/14/log-on-to-find-your-perfect-partner/
You need never be lonely again on Valentine's day. <3
Given up coaching Arsenal then?
Quote: Winterlight @ February 14, 2008, 9:04 PMOh so its Kent Pete and his website AGAIN!
Is it.
But this guy has a bag over his head.
I put my personal differences aside and took a read of this, but have to give it a thumbs down.
You give yourself setups, but don't follow through with a funny line.
It seems as though you take a news story which could be quite plausible, but only subvert it very mildly.
I find it difficult to see what you are trying to spoof/satire. Is the news obsessed with internet dating? No. Chris Morris' Brass Eye paedo special worked because the media was obsessed with paedophiles at the time. He captured the zeitgeist.
I think with a piece like this, it would be best to spoof the Daily Mail's OTT reaction to anything involving sex.
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"It seems as though you take a news story which could be quite plausible, but only subvert it very mildly".
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I think that is called 'subtlety' Winterlight.
But we do agree on one thing, I don't think Kent Pete and British Sitcom Forums was a match made in heaven.
Good luck with your writing mate 