I liked the Germs to Germans joke. I think you could have played that up a bit more. I really liked the delivery of that joke and the sort of confused spaced character you put up when doing the joke. It's something you may want to try a whole set with.
I'd scrap the last condom/ rape joke though for sure.
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Quote: Stuart Laws @ February 6, 2008, 6:05 PMI have, my quarter final is 28th Feb in Earls Court. Hows about you Paul?
Hey stuart - and Paul,
How many gigs have you done if you don't mind me asking?
I am doing laughing horse on the 12th and it is my first gig, so obviously I am shitting bricks.
When was your first heat Stuart?
Sorry your not going paul, I would of bought you a pint.
F**king hell!
Can't make any of those heats cos of bloody training. I really want to get out and see some of the BSG stand ups but can't go anywhere till about mid-March
Stuff was great Stu, the crowd were a bit dodgy (swear I heard one guy say 'thats funny' instead of laughing the numpty ) so you did well.
Just from the video I can tell you have a great stage presence so all you have to do is refine your set.