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Dear Deirdre

Ok here is a bit of a song i wrote, let me know what you think....

Dear Deirdre,
can you pls help me.

My husband likes wearing womens lingerie
Now is he a tranny or something or just a gay,
The first time i Caught him i thought he was just pranking,
But now he sits there legs akimbo in my stockings tommy tanking,
Tell me Deirdre, what should i do,
Your's Sincerely,
Mrs S from crewe.

Dear Mrs S from Crewe
Here is what you should do.
Divorce him, he is a sexual psychopath,
I bet he barely gets it up, let alone can make it last
oh! & that picture you sent of him in his depravity
I emailed it to his Boss, friend's & your son's university
Yours Deirdre
No need to thank me

Dear Deidre
Can you please help me

My girlfriiend deserves a snake, but i am more of a worm
& i only gve out a pathetiic little globule of sperm,
She is a darling & says it does'nt bother her atall
But she lost her finger due to masterbatiing & i know its coz im so small
Tell me Deirdre, for crying out loud
Name & Address obviously witheld

Dear tiny weeny lickle man
My advice is at hand

Your girlfriend is lying to you, It realy bothers her a lot
She stares at other mens crotches and resorts to a plastic cock
Be a decent human let her go so she can find a decent shag rite now
That poor, poor,deprived sex starved silly cow
Yours Deirdre
No need to thank me

Dear Deirdre
Can you pls help me

My man is into swinging & he wants us to have a 20 some
I told him about my reservations but he said "Your no fookn fun"
We are off to a pervy party exactly one week from today
I am scared as hell & bordering on running far far away

Tell me Deirdre Im scared & alone
I'd ring the samaritines,but they have blocked my fone

Dear Scaredy bear
Here's my advice dear

Mr deirdre & I go to a lot of trouble and an awful large exspense
to organiise these party's you ungrateful wench
You had beter be here Monday week or i will kill all that you hold dear
And bring along your genital health screen, need to check its clear
Your's Deirdre
No need to thank me
I am an agony aunt you see
spelt c.... u .... n ... t

Hi Charley

It's very good, if a little explicit :)

Like the twist in the last verse, very sitcommy!

Don't know that I am particularly well qualified to comment on songs though!

Dan

This was before my time on here. I'd love to see it performed.

What about it Charley? Will you bring your instrument with you to our get-together?

Will You have a strum then? I love a good strum. I play mine all day all night & while I am on BR.

OMG!! Just noticed about 5000 spelling mistakes in my song.

There's many a good tune played on an old fiddle!

Perform it now!!!!!!!!!

It's great, I wanna write a song.

Oh, Charley,
Pick up your guitary
And play us that song,
So I can listen to it all night long.

:D

I am playing it now. Can you hear me. If not put a tin of peas to your ear. You will catch it then.

it sounds like a lark - sucked into a jet engine!

imagine if dear Dedire did that?

when god was giving out tact she was definatly in the wrong queue

you should send your work off as its wasted on here(in a nice way) seriously though poeple would laugh. i just wish i could steal some of your thoughts whilst your sleeping exchange it for some of my verbal diahorrea for your brillance

im bowing in repect

LOL. Thanks Ian. If 1 in 100 like something I do then I am a happy girlie.xxxx

Quote: Smith Ian @ June 13, 2007, 4:00 PM

i just wish i could steal some of your thoughts whilst your sleeping exchange it for some of my verbal diahorrea for your brillance

im bowing in repect

Are you sleeping with her then?

NO .....

Shes far to beutiful for my liking

i like them rough and raw

Quote: Smith Ian @ June 15, 2007, 10:51 AM

NO .....

Shes far to beutiful for my liking

i like them rough and raw

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