British Comedy Guide

quickie

INT. DAY. BEDROOM

MAN (talking to mirror)
Hello, no has to be louder. HELLO. I am David. No, my names David, yeah that works. I'm an advertisng rep. No, needs to be more assertive.I'm an advertising consultant. Yep, thats ok. Do you come here often? Nah, thats too corny. You look gorgeous. Hmm, sounds better.

CUT TO RESTAURANT. MAN IS TALKING TO REFLECTION IN MIRROR ON SEAT OPPOSITE.

ENDS.

I laughed at this Nigel. It has a nice visual appeal and I suppose it reminds me a bit of something Spike Milligan might have done.

I liked the sort of bonkers image it conjurs up.

Yeah, clever. Badly explained though.

Yes, a good idea, though could have been set out better on the page perhaps. But a funny idea.

thanks guys

Hi Nige,

Yep, agree with others, it is a bit confused in write up.

Can see the end result though and worth a smile at least.

Less Milligan and more Feldman, methinks.

Told you to keep it on here longer, eh, Nigel? ;)

film it!!! :)

Yeah, that's the proof of the pudding.

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