he could still have black and white and just the blood can be red
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Actually forgot to comment on the sketch, yeah I reckon if you make it, it'll be a fine sketch, I can't quite see it as of yet, but there is potential there.
Nice & grizzly Wooo! I do like a bit of blood & gore. Would make a cracking bedtime video for small children. Say around the age of 4 months +. Market it for small children whose parents leave them alone a lot. Send a copy to the McCann's.
Now with added video!
Really like it, David. Top-notch writing, class animation.
I liked the sketch, but I didn't get the joke.
It's surreal, but in a way that's got so few reference points I couldn't relate to it.
I mean why is a beer company mutilating some one, and why doesn't he die?
How ever much you ask people to suspend disbelief you have to have some point they can relate to.
Quote: sootyj @ September 18 2008, 4:38 PM BSTI mean why is a beer company mutilating some one, and why doesn't he die?
I don't mind the not dying thing. He appears to at the end, anyway. Though I agree, the fact it was a beer company add was a touch confusing.
Then again, it's more obviously relevant than most contemporary alcohol advertisements.
Quote: sootyj @ September 18 2008, 4:38 PM BSTI liked the sketch, but I didn't get the joke.
It's surreal, but in a way that's got so few reference points I couldn't relate to it.
I mean why is a beer company mutilating some one, and why doesn't he die?
How ever much you ask people to suspend disbelief you have to have some point they can relate to.
You couldn't have said all that before Kerry spent 8 months of his life animating the thing! Damn your spine, Sootyj!
The 'point' was that the beer company is aiming to create the perfect drinking man and ending up with a slobbering wreck. How many people got that? I'm starting to think not many. I wondering if some dialogue alterations are needed...
Hmm yes, becuase that's a really good idea that doesn't come over.
Rather like the old ideal smoker adverts.
Quote: sootyj @ September 18 2008, 5:10 PM BSTRather like the old ideal smoker adverts.
There were such things?
Quote: sootyj @ September 18 2008, 5:23 PM BSThttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sWfOLN9Z1yw
Yeah, that's basically what I'm going for - only my version turns out to be sponsored by a brewery.
Maybe I'll go back and dub some new dialogue on there. Cheers for the feedback.
Quote: David Bussell @ September 18 2008, 5:08 PM BSTThe 'point' was that the beer company is aiming to create the perfect drinking man and ending up with a slobbering wreck. How many people got that? I'm starting to think not many. I wondering if some dialogue alterations are needed...
Perhaps you could just directly introduce the concept of a "perfect drinking man". Easily done?
Quote: Tommy Power @ September 18 2008, 5:33 PM BSTPerhaps you could just directly introduce the concept of a "perfect drinking man". Easily done?
That's pretty much what I'm thinking.
Hobo-cop?