Eat My Shirts
Tuesday 15th January 2008 12:59am [Edited]
693 posts
Ok.
When I first clicked on your website, I thought it belonged to a small-time rock musician from midwest America or something. The image you have as your banner doesn’t exactly ooze comedy. It’s too slick. It automatically turns me off because I don’t want a “comedy performer” to look cool. I want them to be peculiar and unattractive. That’s all part of the charm, for me. Although others may not agree, and I can appreciate this might be your personal website and not just a comedy one.
Having said that, I think that had you superimposed yourself onto another background, instead of the MOTEL one, it would have been better. I would have replaced the MOTEL sign, with one of these:
Also, have you considered changing your surname? Bussell is ok, but it sounds a bit poncy. I think BRUSSELL or BUSHELL sounds better. Or even spelling it; BUSTLE. Think about it.
Thanks for giving me the opportunity to critique your website.