Critique you would 'really' like to write. Page 4

Your script made me cut myself a new vagina.

Well you know where you can shove your script then!

I cant decide where tho!

I was caught short and your script came in most useful!

After reading your script I'll never read again..

I had reduced my vibrator to a stump, so thanks for the use of your script.

I did snort at a line off your script!

That was worse than one of Jerf's monologues.

I printed off your script & posted it to "The script rescue home". A place for unwanted & unloved scripts.
Where several people will try their hardest to re write every f**king word until it can be re-homed.

You are the Thief of Bad Gags

You c**t!

I'd recommend you slit your throat.

I didn't like it, but well done for trying. Better luck next time.

(ouch, that was always the thing that hurt at school with work...when teachers say well done for trying)

WoW!!!!!I really really really really really really really really,
really really really really really really really really really,
really really really really really really really really really
F**king hated that.

Hate is a strong word, but I really, really, really didn't like it.

Have you thought of putting something funny in this?

Paraphrase (c) Dense Twat - Chorkle 2007