Critique you would 'really' like to write. Page 2

Well as my ankle is broken, my other limbs are now moving at extra quick speed to make up for it!

Quote: Ray Dawson @ January 10, 2008, 9:48 PM

Only because i don't have a broken ankle

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Quote: James Williams @ January 10, 2008, 9:49 PM

See, I knew I'd regret posting that. Stop toying with me. The error was intentional, as I acknowledged in parenthesis. I just want to break free sometimes. *Sobs*

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I got there before you'd edited it though and added on the rest! Doh!

I wouldn't of posted that if I were you..

Do you have a first class degree Ellie?

Now who's baiting Frankie?

Quote: Ray Dawson @ January 10, 2008, 9:52 PM

Do you have a first class degree Ellie?

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In drinking...yes!

I'll come clean. I don't really have a first-class degree. I've never even had a first-class train ticket. I've even got third-degree burns.

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That was a joke too.
Obviously I have a first.

Me too, and broken bones of course.

I've got a BO(arms)

If you've a 'first' does that you mean you got as much as 40%+ as a mark?

I mean, in these dumbed down days..

No baiting going on ... just messing around ...

Love his sketches and his video!!!

Your work would be enormously improved by shredding

Quote: Frankie Rage @ January 10, 2008, 9:57 PM

No baiting going on ... just messing around ...

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I know! I was too...just picking up on your grammatical mistake...made me laugh!

Live and let live Jerf!

INT. MAN ANSWERS TELEPHONE AND IS OBVIOUSLY ANNOYED.

MAN:
It's Gary, g-a-r-y Gary Pride..

Quote: EllieJP @ January 10, 2008, 10:05 PM

I know! I was too...just picking up on your grammatical mistake...made me laugh!

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I've also had a lot of trouble with rightcheous rightchous er oh, um couldn't even spell check it somehow..

Your sketch reminded me of when I had my coil fitted.

Quote: Jerf Roberwitz @ January 10, 2008, 9:59 PM

Can we keep of the Gay stuff, I'm. a genuine, in the medical sense, Homophobic.

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"In the medical sense"!!
There isn't a medical sense. Now you are being provocative!

I wish I hadn't brought it up now.

Oo-er!!

It was just an example of a refreshingly artless critique. Nothing to do with sexuality, rest assured.

I had to stop half way through as I had an egg on a low light.

Got half way down & the baliffs knocked. I invited them in for a cup of tea.

Quote: James Williams @ January 10, 2008, 9:55 PM

I've even got third-degree burns.

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Please don't say on the knees and elbows