The customer is always right, but if they think that of your script they need a slap.
PS - I hate you.
Critique you would 'really' like to write. Page 14
Bravo Paul, and Frankie. Groan at David's Sweep gag. 
Your sketch has made me religious. I now have an incurable urge to find God..... Now......Bye all!!!
If its any help, there's a gimp shortage on at the moment.
That was so bad I don't think I'll ever get an erection again.
I wanted humour not a tumour.
If this script were a horse I'd shoot it.
I have a critique but its far too evil to write here
As a writer, you have mastered everything except language.
I'm putting your script on suicide watch
Quote: Charley @ January 16, 2008, 11:48 PMI wanted humour not a tumour.
