Chuck it in the Re-cycle bin, it might come back as something more useful, like a bog roll.
Critique you would 'really' like to write. Page 13
Quote: Jerf Roberwitz @ January 15, 2008, 11:24 AMChuck it in the Re-cycle bin, it might come back as something more useful, like a bog roll.
Nice script.
One little tip though if you're looking for constructive critisism, have you thought about leaving out...well...the words?
I laughed. I cried*
*a manic depressive
You're shit and you know you are!
You're shit and you know you are!
You're shit and you know you are!
Become a Hindu, Throw the script on a funeral pyre, commit Suttee by jumping on after it. With a lot of luck, In another life, one of you might come back slightly improved.
I would rather have Chris Langham sat on my face than read another word of this drivel.
Quote: James Williams @ January 16, 2008, 11:59 AMI would rather have Chris Langham sat on my face than read another word of this drivel.
You're so childish 
This came across as a well thought out, well researched piece. But once I’d got passed the title, clearly I could see I was wrong.
Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!
Quote: Eat_My_Shirts @ January 15, 2008, 1:03 PMYou're shit and you know you are!
You're shit and you know you are!You're shit and you know you are!
I like a good laugh, I didn't like this.
I used to feel guilty for wanking off your dad while he was sleeping, now I'm not so bad.
Quote: Jerf Roberwitz @ January 16, 2008, 11:43 AMBecome a Hindu, Throw the script on a funeral pyre, commit Suttee
Is that with Sweep and Sue?
You say you'd die for your audience, but you never do.