*pushes bed under window*
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Critique you would 'really' like to write. Page 12
Great sketch. Absolutely great, enthralling, hilarious, it just has everything. You really are a genius.
Oh, by the way, can I borrow your badge, please? Just I need to be parked a bit nearer the shop today.
I'd like to say what a wonderful piece of writing this is...i'd like to?
Some of it isn't too bad.. no, no, tell a lie..
Really?
there's more chance of a rocking horse shiteing than you getting anywhere with this.
Yes i can see where you were going with this. Chortle's thataway!
I'm putting your sketch into Witless Protection.
Wow! This is dark, yet light. Funny, yet serious. Average, but shite!
Quote: David Bussell @ January 14, 2008, 5:24 PMI'm putting your sketch into Witless Protection.
My Fav bit was the CLOSE at the end.
Quote: David Bussell @ January 14, 2008, 5:24 PMI'm putting your sketch into Witless Protection.
You’ll see I’ve had to edit out the foul and abusive language, but on a brighter note, I have left some of your original script.
Cat.......in......at.......mat.......innit.......sex........sex.........sex
Not so much copy and paste as copy and bin
Sorry I am unable to critique your sketch on bird watching as I am totally blind!
It's not the best script I've ever read.