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BSG Sketch Comp 7-13.1.08! Page 2

Scene: Dad is trimming his prize Begonias in the garden. He stands with pride and surveys his beautiful garden. Then his eye falls on a bare patch. He frowns.]

Enter wife and son. Son is crying.

Derek: Do you know I can't get f**k all to grow in that patch over there. I'll never win the Parish garden show while that eye sore exists.

Wife: Derek, please, our Nigel.

Derek: Oh, sorry, what's wrong lad?

Nigel: My.....my.... my....[Bursts into tears]

Wife: His hamsters died Derek.

Derek: Never mind lad [rubs his head] he had a good innings. We'll pop down to the pet store and get you another one eh?

Wife: How could you be so insensitive Derek. We need to bury Harry first!

Derek: Oh yes. Oh yes!!! [Eyes brighten up] I've just the spot. Right, well here's a couple of quid. How do ya fancy a slap up meal in McDonalds. You'd like that wouldn't you Nigel.

Nigel: I supposed [sniff] so.

Derek: You take him down and I'll sort out the you know what by the time you get back.

Wife: Thanks Derek [she pecks him on cheek.]

[They leave. Door heard slamming and car starting up. Derek rushes into house and grabs dead hamster. He quickly puts it into a liquidiser and blitzes it. He takes out a bag of sugar and tips it into the liquidizer. Blitzes again. He takes mixture and poors it into a glass jar. He disappears upstairs and returns with a shoe box. He puts jar in box and seals it with elastic bands.

CUT TO LATER

Nigel is seen placing box in hole in the ground. [They bow heads]

CUT TO FOLLOWING MORNING

Nigel: [From garden] Mum, Dad! Come out here quick

[They run out]

Wife: Bloody hell, that's amazing!

[In the bare patch there is now a beautiful show of Daffodils]

Derek: You can say that again. I thought you only got tulips from Hamster Jam.

Sorry Marion! :$

Do we vote yet? Is so chalk one up to Frankie

If we've started voting ill also vote for Frankie great sketch mate

My vote goes to Charley ... although as usual there are other 'close callers'! There should be a way of spreading votes between (say) first, second and third choices.

God this is hard! They are all good & there are 3 I really liked. The Rage, Roscoff & Bushbabys. Hmmmm so difficult. Can I not vote for each seeing as how I have missed voting on some occasions? Someone else pick one of those 3 for me! If I have to choose I will but its sooooooooooooooooooooo hard. Ok I will have to do ibb dibb dog shit!
Back in a mo............................
Nope I dont like ibb dibb.
Ok ok The Rage.

I'm going with Frankies... It reminded me of a scene from a 1970's sitcom.

Not that your style is old or anything Frankie... Oh boy I'm going to hear about this in the morning.

Paul W (provided he uses the right character name in the last line). A bit Dave Allen-esque, I thought.

DANNY

Charlie & Arnie, 2 Funeral Directors, are standing at the back of a full church. There are also a couple of heavies standing there.

CHARLIE
So why didn't they want us to bring the coffin?

ARNIE
I dunno really. Seems a bit strange. But they did ask us to keep this area clear.

CHARLIE
All a bit mysterious really. Who's funeral is it anyway?

ARNIE
Some bloke who worked in films I believe. Stuntman I think.

At this point an american style ambulance comes screeching up the avenue towards the church doors. The driver does a handbrake turn, the ambulance doors fly open and a cofiin comes flying out of the back spinning on the ground. It stops at the feet of the 2 heavies who gesture to Arnie and Charley to help them with the coffin. They pick it up and carry it into the church. The doors close.

Scene reopens at the graveside, the mourners all around. The priest is saying the usual things as the coffin is lowered into the ground.

PRIEST
Earth to earth, ashes to ashes, dust to dust.

Then one of the heavies gestures for the priest to move away. He then proceeds to throw the traditional dirt on the coffin which promptly explodes and a large puff of smoke billows into the air. The mourners all start to clap.

Paul W gets it for me.

The Rage for a great sketch and I love mother-in-law jokes!

Quote: Badge @ January 13, 2008, 8:11 PM

Paul W (provided he uses the right character name in the last line). A bit Dave Allen-esque, I thought.

Ok I sorted it... >_<

Thanks for the vote. :D

Quote: Paul W @ January 13, 2008, 8:02 PM

I'm going with Frankies... It reminded me of a scene from a 1970's sitcom. Not that your style is old or anything Frankie... Oh boy I'm going to hear about this in the morning.

Not at all mate, as you know (between banter) I have always been a Cosmos100 fan.. and THANKS for the vote!

And my vote is for you PAUL W

For me this week it was between Paul W and James Williams - neck and neck - both completely different sketches so it was hard to choose.. in the end I have gone for the ACTION sketch. This could be a real stormer with the right production! Loved the characters in James sketch though!!

Great stuff boys! :)

My vote is for Fred P!

Vote Fred

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