Not sure on the spelling, it's Botachelli.
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Bocelli.
I really like this, bushbaby. Sorry I can't think of anything else to say except I can picture it well and think you've done brilliantly to get so far. I like the title, too.
Gavin have a go at this
Easily the strongest is the start. Excellent, imaginative and as these people only tend to read the first ten pages it catches the eye straight away. All I can say after that is that it does sound more like a comedy/drama but nout wrong wi tha' luv!