James Williams
Monday 31st December 2007 10:49pm [Edited]
Malvern
1,366 posts
Well, I mentioned the Ramsay bit earlier. That bit was not creative enough for me because it was just Ramsay having an argument. I wanted to either see some sort of clever wordplay somewhere, somehow, or some twist to make it more interesting. It was like they had an idea and didn't really bother writing it in properly.
A lot of the other cameos were so unremarkable I can't really remember them. Maybe that's a good thing. I don't think it is though.
All the sub-plot bits with Maggie towards the end were a bit tedious. It was like they had said "We need a sub-plot, we need a change of pace, but we're starting to run out of ideas so keep having shots of Maggie looking grim."
I also found the extension of throwaway references made in the first series a little curious, e.g. working in the Carphone Warehouse and Ronnie Corbett. I mean, they had a whole episode in series 2 expanding on the Corbett reference, I thought it was odd to hear about it again in the special. I think this is nit-picking on its own, but with the various other things it seems to be the equivalent of me sitting in my digs at uni trying desperately to reach the 5,000 word mark for an essay, and packing in overly long or weaker stuff to hit the limit.
The transformation of Millman, the everyman, to Scrooge and back was rather clumsy and sudden - getting that extra fired and everything - for me it just wasn't believable at all. It was a classic soap-opera like moulding of character to fit the needs of the plot, something which the writers mocked in the WTWB Spanish special (I've said this already too.) This observation strikes me as glaringly obvious, and certainly not ignorant or pretentious. It's so obvious that I'm trying to think of a reason why the writers would do it on purpose.
There was other stuff too, but as I said, I'm not going to go through everything because I don't want to be accused anymore of being a nit-picker, which I'm sure I've added enough fuel to the fire for already. The whole thing just left me a little disappointed; even the inclusion of Dean Gaffney, which made up some of the funniest bits, seemed like an all-too obvious choice. It was still very, very good, but I just think it was stretched out a little too long to be deemed a classic. I'm not sure I should comment on it further until I've watched it again (which will probably not be for some time), as I'm hoping I will enjoy it a lot more the second time round. I certainly don't fancy watching it with pen and paper in hand writing down all the odd odds and ends that seemed a little too weak or easy. But I did go away from it on first viewing a little disappointed.
Edit: Extention/extension misspelling. Pedantic me.